One owl, two buttons, and a flag strip that thinks chess is a country.

Big promise, fuzzy ending: 'and more!' does the work a real list should do.

'The most fun way to learn' is a clear, confident promise, and 'languages, chess' tells me what's on the menu. Then 'and more!' shrugs, even though the strip at the bottom already shows the 'more': it's math. There's no line under the headline, so it never says why this beats a textbook, a class or another app, and it never answers the two questions every visitor brings: what does it cost, and how much time does it take?

Quick win: Replace 'and more!' with what the bottom strip already shows: 'The most fun way to learn languages, chess, and math.' Then add one line underneath about cost and time (see fix #1).

One loud green button, one quiet one. Hard to get wrong.

'Get started' is bright green, full width and the first thing your eye lands on after the owl, so the next step is obvious. 'I already have an account' sits underneath in a plain white box with blue text, clearly second in line, which is exactly where it belongs. The only gap is that 'Get started' doesn't say what starts: a quiz, a lesson, a sign-up form?

Quick win: Make the label say what happens next, for example 'Start your first lesson', and keep the second button exactly as it is.

Clean, friendly and very green, though the characters are mid-tumble down a phone screen.

There's lots of breathing room, one headline, two buttons, and the owl is instantly recognisable. The illustration has energy, but it shows people falling sideways past coins, which says 'fun' without showing what a lesson actually looks like. The flag strip at the bottom is tidy, but it puts the Chess and Math icons in a row of country flags, so it reads like chess got its own passport.

Quick win: Add a small label above the bottom strip, such as 'Pick what to learn:', so it reads as a menu of choices rather than a row of decorations.

The first screen leans entirely on the owl's reputation.

Nothing visible here backs up 'the most fun way': no rating, no learner count, no review, no word on price. Plenty of visitors already know the owl, but a first-timer gets nothing that answers 'is this good, and is there a catch?' If any proof lives further down the page, I can't see it in these screenshots.

Quick win: Put one short line of proof directly under the two buttons, for example 'Join [number] learners worldwide.' using your real figure.

Short and warm, but the most useful sentence hasn't been written yet.

The whole page is roughly fifteen words, and it never uses jargon, which is a real strength. But 'most fun' is a claim anyone can make, and 'and more!' with an exclamation mark sounds a bit like a party invitation that forgot the address. The words never mention lessons, time or price, so the visitor has to click just to find out the basics.

Quick win: Add one plain sentence under the headline that covers price and effort, for example 'Free, bite-sized lessons you can do in a few minutes a day' (only if that's accurate for you).

Great buttons for a thumb, but the headline ends with 'and more!' alone on its own line.

Both buttons stretch the full width of the phone and are easy to tap, and the green one is clearly the main one. The headline is big and readable, but it breaks so that 'and more!' sits alone on the last line, which spotlights the vaguest words on the page. The language and subject strip from desktop doesn't appear here, so a phone visitor sees no hint of what they can learn beyond 'languages, chess'. There are also large empty gaps above the headline and above the buttons.

Quick win: Use the shortened headline from fix #2 so it ends on 'math' rather than 'more!', and put the new cost-and-time line in the gap above the buttons.